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Posted on 5/16/24 at 12:37 pm to
Posted by Floating Change Up
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Posted on 5/16/24 at 12:37 pm to
Write a script treatment using the movie better off dead where Johnny Gasparini's daughter is tormented for by Lane and Monique's really dumb, but funny, triplets for an unpaid door dash tip.
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Title: Better Off Unpaid

Genre: Comedy

Logline: When Lane Meyer and Monique's triplets inadvertently stiff Johnny Gasparini's daughter on a DoorDash tip, chaos ensues as the triplets become entangled in a series of hilarious misadventures trying to make amends and escape Johnny's wrath.

Act 1:

We open with Lane Meyer and Monique enjoying a cozy evening at home with their mischievous triplets—Bob, Bill, and Bert. As they order food through DoorDash, the triplets playfully argue over who gets to answer the door when the delivery arrives.

Meanwhile, across town, Johnny Gasparini, a notorious mobster, is having dinner with his daughter, Gina. When the DoorDash delivery finally arrives, the triplets excitedly greet the delivery person but accidentally forget to tip them, leaving Gina fuming.

Act 2:

The next day, Lane and Monique receive a threatening visit from Johnny Gasparini's goons, demanding payment for the unpaid tip. Terrified, Lane and Monique enlist the help of their triplets to come up with a plan to make things right.

The triplets, being both dim-witted and mischievous, concoct a series of harebrained schemes to raise money for the tip. From a lemonade stand gone wrong to a disastrous attempt at busking on the streets, their efforts only seem to worsen the situation.

Meanwhile, Gina, still seething over the lack of a tip, begins to exact her own revenge on the triplets, leading to a hilarious game of cat and mouse across town.

Act 3:

As the chaos escalates, Lane and Monique realize they must confront Johnny Gasparini directly to resolve the situation. In a tense and comically absurd showdown, they plead for forgiveness and offer to make amends.

To their surprise, Johnny is touched by their sincerity and humorously agrees to let bygones be bygones. Gina, too, is won over by the triplets' antics and begrudgingly accepts their apology.

In the end, Lane, Monique, and the triplets learn the importance of kindness and generosity, even in the face of absurdity and danger. As they sit down to a family dinner, they reflect on their wild adventure and toast to being "better off unpaid."

Fade Out.

In "Better Off Unpaid," comedy ensues as Lane, Monique, and their triplets navigate a series of hilarious mishaps while trying to right a wrong and avoid the wrath of a mobster's daughter. With a mix of slapstick humor, witty dialogue, and heartwarming moments, this film promises to entertain audiences of all ages.
Posted by Itismemc
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Posted on 5/16/24 at 2:17 pm to
**Temporal Seas**

**Genre: Action / Adventure / Sci-Fi**

**Logline:**
A modern-day luxury cruise ship gets mysteriously transported to the Golden Age of Piracy after passing through the Bermuda Triangle. The passengers and crew must fend off an alliance of notorious pirates using improvised weapons and wits, culminating in a shocking twist that links past and future.

**Act 1: The Mysterious Voyage**

1. **Introduction to the Cruise:**
- The luxury cruise ship *Ocean Odyssey* sets sail from Miami, filled with a diverse group of passengers, including families, honeymooners, and a tech-savvy crew.
- Captain James Hawkins, a seasoned and respected leader, ensures everything runs smoothly as the ship embarks on its week-long journey.

2. **Entering the Bermuda Triangle:**
- The ship ventures into the Bermuda Triangle, a region known for mysterious disappearances.
- Strange phenomena occur: compasses spin wildly, electronics malfunction, and an eerie fog envelops the ship.
- Suddenly, the ship is engulfed by a violent storm, and everything goes black.

3. **Arrival in the Past:**
- The storm subsides, and the passengers and crew find themselves in calm, sunlit waters.
- They realize they have been transported back to the early 18th century, the Golden Age of Piracy.
- On the horizon, a fleet of pirate ships approaches, flying the Jolly Roger.

**Act 2: The Battle for Survival**

4. **The Pirate Alliance:**
- Famous pirates—Blackbeard, Anne Bonny, Calico Jack, and Captain Kidd—have formed a rare alliance to seize the technologically advanced ship.
- The pirates board the *Ocean Odyssey*, expecting an easy victory, but are met with unexpected resistance.

5. **Improvised Defenses:**
- Captain Hawkins and his crew organize the passengers, transforming the ship’s amenities into makeshift weapons.
- Kitchen staff use knives and boiling water, the maintenance crew creates slingshots from pool equipment, and passengers use deck chairs as shields.

6. **The Initial Skirmish:**
- A fierce battle ensues on the decks of the *Ocean Odyssey*.
- The crew’s ingenuity and the passengers’ bravery catch the pirates off guard, forcing them to retreat temporarily.

7. **Strategic Planning:**
- Realizing the pirates will regroup and return, Captain Hawkins leads a planning session to fortify the ship and devise new strategies.
- They use the ship's advanced navigation systems to anticipate pirate movements, despite their limited functionality.

**Act 3: The Final Confrontation and the Twist**

8. **The Pirate Siege:**
- The pirate alliance returns, launching a coordinated siege.
- The passengers and crew fight valiantly, using every resource at their disposal, including fireworks from the entertainment department as makeshift explosives.

9. **Turning the Tide:**
- Captain Hawkins and a small team infiltrate the pirate flagship, using stealth and surprise to take down Blackbeard and disrupt the pirate command.
- The remaining pirates, leaderless and demoralized, are defeated by the determined passengers and crew.

10. **The Return to the Future:**
- As the dust settles, the ship's navigation system mysteriously reactivates, displaying an anomaly similar to the one that brought them to the past.
- Captain Hawkins steers the ship through the anomaly, hoping to return to their own time.

11. **Surprising Twist:**
- The ship emerges from the anomaly back in the Bermuda Triangle, but in the year 2050.
- They discover a future where piracy has evolved with advanced technology, and the ship must now face a new kind of threat in a dystopian world dominated by high-tech pirates.

**Epilogue:**
- The passengers and crew, having survived the Golden Age of Piracy, must now adapt to a future world of advanced piracy.
- Captain Hawkins, now a seasoned leader in both past and future conflicts, prepares his crew for the new challenges ahead, hinting at further adventures.

**End with a cliffhanger:**
- The ship sails towards a futuristic city on the horizon, where a massive, technologically advanced pirate fleet awaits, setting up the potential for a sequel.
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